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		<title>Comment on The Story behind City of Brotherly Love by Kathryn Craft</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2012/05/17/the-story-behind-city-of-brotherly-love/#comment-18564</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kathryn Craft]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2012 19:13:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Barbara, I will never be accused of aspiring to write horror. But I enjoyed reading why you were! Thanks for sharing.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Barbara, I will never be accused of aspiring to write horror. But I enjoyed reading why you were! Thanks for sharing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Story behind City of Brotherly Love by neptune1021</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2012/05/17/the-story-behind-city-of-brotherly-love/#comment-18556</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[neptune1021]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2012 12:10:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you! I, too, have gotten nauseated after visiting a mummy gallery where there were skeletons - I actually lost my appetite for several days. 
Barbara of the Balloons]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! I, too, have gotten nauseated after visiting a mummy gallery where there were skeletons &#8211; I actually lost my appetite for several days.<br />
Barbara of the Balloons</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Story behind City of Brotherly Love by Catherine DePino</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2012/05/17/the-story-behind-city-of-brotherly-love/#comment-18517</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Catherine DePino]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 23:38:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Barbara,

This was a great story about your fear of skeletons! It was beautifully written too. I don&#039;t write horror but I&#039;m afraid of being dizzy (I just got over a bout of it!) and crazily, throwing up. 

I love your blog!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Barbara,</p>
<p>This was a great story about your fear of skeletons! It was beautifully written too. I don&#8217;t write horror but I&#8217;m afraid of being dizzy (I just got over a bout of it!) and crazily, throwing up. </p>
<p>I love your blog!</p>
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		<title>Comment on When to Hire an Editor by neptune1021</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2011/12/28/when-to-hire-an-editor/#comment-18328</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[neptune1021]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 May 2012 20:20:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[That&#039;s why it helps for editors to specify the type of editing that they do. They might proofread, that is, catch typos; copy edit or line edit - making the lines flow more smoothly, and finally content editing, in which the editor points out problems with the plot.

Content editing is really important if you&#039;re self-publishing a book.
Barbara]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s why it helps for editors to specify the type of editing that they do. They might proofread, that is, catch typos; copy edit or line edit &#8211; making the lines flow more smoothly, and finally content editing, in which the editor points out problems with the plot.</p>
<p>Content editing is really important if you&#8217;re self-publishing a book.<br />
Barbara</p>
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		<title>Comment on When to Hire an Editor by Rayne Hall (@RayneHall)</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2011/12/28/when-to-hire-an-editor/#comment-18313</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rayne Hall (@RayneHall)]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 May 2012 08:05:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The issue gets confusing because &quot;editing&quot; means different things to different people. It used to mean a professional editor selecting material for a publication and/or improving a writers&#039;s work. These two are confusing enough (other languages have different words for them).

But now it can also mean &quot;proofreading&quot; (catching micro-mistakes such as typos and misplaced punctuation), &quot;critiquing&quot; (feedback on what works and doesn&#039;t work) and &quot;revising&quot; (the writer improving her/his own work).

So five people talking about &quot;editing&quot; their work may be talking about five different things, and this can lead to misundertandings.

For example, one writer may advise a novice &quot;Don&#039;t edit your own work&quot;  (meaning &quot;Don&#039;t proofread it, because you won&#039;t spot your own spelling errors&quot;) and the novice thinks she doesn&#039;t need to revise her writing.

Another example: an novice indie author proudly proclaims that her book has been &quot;edited&quot; (meaning she got feedback from a crit buddy) and is therefore ready for publication.

With the changing role of editors in the new publishing world, the definitions are getting more and more muddled. Hopefully, new words will emerge to replace the old and make things clearer. Until then, writers and editors need to be very careful to clarify what they mean and what they want from one another.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The issue gets confusing because &#8220;editing&#8221; means different things to different people. It used to mean a professional editor selecting material for a publication and/or improving a writers&#8217;s work. These two are confusing enough (other languages have different words for them).</p>
<p>But now it can also mean &#8220;proofreading&#8221; (catching micro-mistakes such as typos and misplaced punctuation), &#8220;critiquing&#8221; (feedback on what works and doesn&#8217;t work) and &#8220;revising&#8221; (the writer improving her/his own work).</p>
<p>So five people talking about &#8220;editing&#8221; their work may be talking about five different things, and this can lead to misundertandings.</p>
<p>For example, one writer may advise a novice &#8220;Don&#8217;t edit your own work&#8221;  (meaning &#8220;Don&#8217;t proofread it, because you won&#8217;t spot your own spelling errors&#8221;) and the novice thinks she doesn&#8217;t need to revise her writing.</p>
<p>Another example: an novice indie author proudly proclaims that her book has been &#8220;edited&#8221; (meaning she got feedback from a crit buddy) and is therefore ready for publication.</p>
<p>With the changing role of editors in the new publishing world, the definitions are getting more and more muddled. Hopefully, new words will emerge to replace the old and make things clearer. Until then, writers and editors need to be very careful to clarify what they mean and what they want from one another.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Tom Johnson by neptune1021</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/about/night-to-dawn-magazine-and-books/tom-johnsons-sf-and-adventure/#comment-18213</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[neptune1021]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 May 2012 20:34:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you. Glad you enjoy. Tom will be glad to hear this.
Barbara]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you. Glad you enjoy. Tom will be glad to hear this.<br />
Barbara</p>
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		<title>Comment on Tom Johnson by Rebekah James Johnson</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/about/night-to-dawn-magazine-and-books/tom-johnsons-sf-and-adventure/#comment-18204</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rebekah James Johnson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 May 2012 15:42:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[good job with JUR my sis loves the book]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>good job with JUR my sis loves the book</p>
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		<title>Comment on Killing Your Darlings and other Writerly Issues by neptune1021</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2012/03/29/killing-your-darlings-and-other-writerly-issues/#comment-17136</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[neptune1021]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Apr 2012 00:45:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Pacing is important. I find a lot of good action in your stories, while mine tends to focus on the emotion of the character. Oh, I will have battles, but the protag wil lbe worried for her mother. Pulp Echoes read really well!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pacing is important. I find a lot of good action in your stories, while mine tends to focus on the emotion of the character. Oh, I will have battles, but the protag wil lbe worried for her mother. Pulp Echoes read really well!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Killing Your Darlings and other Writerly Issues by neptune1021</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2012/03/29/killing-your-darlings-and-other-writerly-issues/#comment-17135</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[neptune1021]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Apr 2012 00:42:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I agree. Having read the chapter on Kaze, I find her a rather likeable, sympathetic villain.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree. Having read the chapter on Kaze, I find her a rather likeable, sympathetic villain.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Killing Your Darlings and other Writerly Issues by Tom Johnson</title>
		<link>http://bloodredshadow.com/2012/03/29/killing-your-darlings-and-other-writerly-issues/#comment-17115</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tom Johnson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Mar 2012 15:44:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Pacing and timeline is very important in a story. I try to be aware of both when telling a story. I love the old pulp stories, when writers didn&#039;t bother with either. I read a war story in which a general was preparing his men to attack an invading army in California on the next day. He sends a message to New York, requesting a battle ship. One is dispatched, travels through the Panama Canal and arrived the next morning to assist in the battle. That must have been one fast ship! But science fiction was really fantastic. The hero could jump in his rocket ship on Earth and blast off for Mars, and be there in an hour. This was before we thought of time warps or faster-than-the-the-speed-of light flight. Just like jumping in your automobile and running down to the grocery store (lol). But hey, I loved it!!! I still read those crazy old stories.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pacing and timeline is very important in a story. I try to be aware of both when telling a story. I love the old pulp stories, when writers didn&#8217;t bother with either. I read a war story in which a general was preparing his men to attack an invading army in California on the next day. He sends a message to New York, requesting a battle ship. One is dispatched, travels through the Panama Canal and arrived the next morning to assist in the battle. That must have been one fast ship! But science fiction was really fantastic. The hero could jump in his rocket ship on Earth and blast off for Mars, and be there in an hour. This was before we thought of time warps or faster-than-the-the-speed-of light flight. Just like jumping in your automobile and running down to the grocery store (lol). But hey, I loved it!!! I still read those crazy old stories.</p>
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